The Unexpected by zellbell ~ Comments

[zellbell]

I have to admit while reading Breaking Dawn whenever they were together I could just see the chemistry.

I always felt Leah had the hots for Jake. Leah sooo  Jake

so I thought why not write about it.
Its nice to hear you like it  Leah is so fun to write about
I love her temper     and her love of getting revenge 

[acs1281]

 

Thank you! You're the best! Now I just want more! You've TOTALLY nailed Leah.  It's just as I imagined her speaking.  Great job! THANK YOU!!!!

[zellbell]

awww thanks
tomorrow we have another update...hope you like it 

[EMHW.Bear]

Hi ZellBell,

I've been following your updates religiously, I just haven't been posting
in the comments thread. I always thought Leah and Jake would have made an
excellent couple too. If he'd have stopped chasing Bella for a minute he might have realized
it. I'm anxious to see where the story goes from here. Glad your updates are coming in so soon.
Is it completely written already? I swear I don't know how some of you authors do it. Any way
good job and keep up the good work. 

[zellbell]

aww its great to hear from you EMHW.Bear

its so true...the perfect person for him was right infront of his eyes and he missed her

well not this time 

Ive written most of the fanfic so the updates will be coming more often
Im trying to update one everyother day...tomoro may even be a double

it all depends on my mood 

[EMHW.Bear]

Hey Zellbell,

That's not even fair. lol!! You can't leave it at the end of chapter 9
for too long. I don't think I could handle it. I was all into it and then
bam! there was no more. Good job at putting completely on edge though. 
Please post again soon, like perhaps tomorrow...

[kIkI CuLLeN]

I'm loving this story!
You're actually making me like Leah more. =]
It seemed like a great dream. I wish I had dreams that nice all the time. ^_^

UPDATE SOON!
 

[acs1281]

I'm with Bear! Did Jake see her naked? I'm REAAAAALLLY loving the whole maybe Jake & Leah pairing.  Seriously. Wow.  Awesome writing.  Can't wait for more!!!!!

[zellbell]

EMHW = I love how I put you on the edge  

KIKI = lol I love my dreams...since The Unexpected I keep having Jake dreams  
writing this ive begun to like Leah...she was never my first choice
it was going to be  a Jake POV then I changed my mind...now I love her shes great  

acs1281 = I swear I was just thinking about you...I posted and it said someone else posted so post your post again...I have a look and its you...i was going to say I wonder what she thinks about my triple post

as for the did Jake see Leah naked ... your gonna have to wait 

will try and update tonight  

[acs1281]

So naturally this was the first thing I checked when I got home.  I was soooo happy to read the update. I  Leah for what she did to Rose! I know that's just how Rose is but it's about dang time someone gave her her comeuppance! Loving Leah's spunk.  Thanks for hookin' an addict up. 

[jazzvamp90]

Zehra! I'm a horrible ELP for not commenting any sooner! Now that I'm here...*takes deep breath*

These chapters are even better the second time around!   I love this story and you've nailed Leah and Jacob perfectly! So great!! The chemistry is very much there and alive.  

I still can't get over Leah's dream and then waking up to the sweet kiss. I still 'awe' out loud! lol  Then messing up Rose's room! Priceless! lol I can picture that scene in my head perfectly!

Looking forward the next updates! I'm off to do some beta work  

[zellbell]

good to hear everyone is liking it 

hehehe I had soo much fun writing this chapter 

[sharnie91]

HaHa...... This is very good !
i love leah she is my all time fave charecter...! i love that u have her completely right and with jake.... before nessie came along i wanted then to be together... 

realy good i love it so far.... only upto chapter 5

[zellbell]

I thought they were soo made for eachother 

enjoy the rest of the chapters
will update tomorrow

[acs1281]

LOVE IT! I can just picture Jake watching her. I think I woulda fallen on my head too!